There are many majors in a university. A high school student has to choose a major which fits his/her ability and s/he like to learn about. These majors can be classified into four faculties: The Faculty of Education, The Faculty of Economics and Administrative Sciences, The Faculty of Engineering, The Faculty of Medicine.
The first one is The Faculty of Education. This faculty includes all majors which are pertinent to education such as Language Teaching, Social Science Teaching etc. It teaches to the students how the people are educated a subject is explained. The students receive such great education that they can educate people of all ages successfully. Students who concerning to teach everybody without any segregation must prefer this faculty.
The other one is The Faculty of Economics and Administrative Sciences. This faculty includes the majors which are related to administration, politician, finance, etc. It wants the students to professionalize on organizing and manage people, and to be good at monetary policy. Its mission is what is to educate individuals whose social ability has improved and endowed with knowledge and ability in the global sphere. The students preferring this faculty should take into consideration those options.
Another one is The Faculty of Engineering. This faculty takes in the majors such as electrical engineering, industrial engineering, genetic engineering, food engineering, etc. Its purpose is to professionalize individuals preferring one of these majors in the field of designing, conception. Creativity is the most important condition which is wanted at this faculty. The students preferring this faculty must be broad-minded and have ability on creativity and architecture.
The last one is Medicine Faculty. It includes the majors such as doctor, nurse, veterinarian etc. This faculty takes improving health of all creatures as a goal. It includes the most difficult but the most demanded majors. For example, a student wanting to be a doctor has to struggle six years at least. The students who prefer these majors must not forget its difficulties.
The Faculty of Education must be preferred the students loving to teach. The Faculty of Economics and Administrative Sciences is ideal for the students wanting to improve themselves in the global field. The Faculty of Engineering is the best decision to students who take pleasure in creating and innovation. Medicine Faculty is the only option to the students enjoying from curing patients. It must not be ignored that every faculty has many difficulties and easiness, but what is important is being able to decide on true faculty.
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- At Ocak 03, 2011 Pau Elt 1/A Group 3 said...
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Hi Sebahattin:)
grammar:there are some mistakes in your essay.I can't understand what you mean with 'major'.I think you can choose more suitable word.
organization:your organization is ok.There are a introduction,a hook and thesis statement etc.
content:you use more suitable words.Except from words, it is ok.
thanks.
Evrim ERTAY. - At Ocak 04, 2011 Pau Elt 1/A Gropu 1 said...
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Hi my friend :) your essay is good . You explained body paragraph and conclusion clearly. Organization is well. You chose good topic. There are some grammatical mistakes.But not important. You can correct them. Essay's content is well and fluency. That's all..
- At Ocak 04, 2011 mehmet said...
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Hi sebahattin
Your essay has very good content.There is no problem in your content.Organisation is also good but maybe you can use longer sentences to enrich your essay.I saw some gramatical mistakes but you can fix them easily.That's all well done!